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Oh:( LOL!!!

You took out the retard sounding "Go Go Power Rangers!" But i guess it still works with my high voice. Lol and I love how you actually put "2 pantyhose ruined" but really, they werent even pantyhose... they were more fake song thingys... but yeah. Whatever. Lol still love this song.

Burn7 responds:

Yeah I decided it was only funny to us. Because nobody else would understand the backstory and so they would just hear retarded people singing "Go Go Power Rangers DUR" and not get why it's funny.

Lol

Reminds me of Zelda. Not bad though. Just doesnt sound super original. But you might not have been going for that. So yeah. Overall, not bad.

blazephoenix responds:

I tried to make it sound slightly different from a Kirby game, but wanted to make the song to maintain its Kirby feeling.
I find it funny who so many people tell me that this sounds more like a Zelda song than a Kirby one.

Thank you for your comment.

Maybe...

You could have even put this in the classical section. This is really good stuff. Are you actually playing the piano? Or is it some sort of Vst?

ThePineapplePirate responds:

Nah it's a VST, don't have any recording equipment to record real piano and even if I did i'm stuck with a pretty crappy keyboard.

Nice job there my friend

The only thing i can say, is maybe turn it into a longer song. Split up the 2 parts and make 2 seperate parts to 2 different songs for a game? And also, the effect you have on the lead is a little much. A little less could have been better. But great job!

kjhsdgf responds:

thanks for the review!
i'll definitely keep that in mind if i continue this

Not bad

Why are you using a piano 8 bit sound though for the melody? Not sure that was the best choice. And also, your "drums" are very distorted. I know that 8 bit usually is, but it is a little much. You also used some pretty annoying sounds.

Great 8 bit sound to it other than that though. I love how you brought it back into the melody at around 1:50. Great transition. The last half of the song is definitely my favorite.

There are also some random popping sounds throughout the song in different places. Dont think that they are supposed to be there. But great remix other than a few minor details:)

AetherFlaer responds:

Lol Thanks for the advice. Thats weird, you liked the second half but the other guy didn't. Thanks for the 8! And I don't know what you mean by the popping sound.

Nice job

But why did you put it in the video game section? And also, I agree that you should make it longer. It is a pretty decent beat. Good drum choice and also love the effect you put on the drums.

At the very beginning... it sounds like 1 or 2 notes is a little bit off... not sure if that was intentional or not. But it doesnt sound to bad. Most wouldnt even notice it. But nice job.

Fifra responds:

what section would you suggest?
10x for review and will atampt to fi mistakes in longer version

Wow...

Dude, this is the 2nd song of yours i've listened to and I love your style man. Ok, anyone else who is listening to this, you must listen to this in at least 5.1 surround sound... It sounds like 10x cooler!

Hmmm... had to bump it down to 9/10 because of the slightly annoying synth you used around 4:00. I get what you were trying to do, but maybe a little less intense of a "whining" noise. However, i will say, you brought it right back to the song. So nice job there.

Love the ending. I've started to really like how you can blend 2 melodies into 1. I guess the second melody is more of a harmony. But yeah. Love it. Keep it up!

D-Chain responds:

Thanks man :D im really glad people here on NG start to like my style ^^
its really an honor as for me a winning point towards succes :)

and yea.. around 4:00 i just needed build it up towards the climatique feel of the breakdown, and bring it back to the standard beat + chords,
then building it up once moar to a 2nd climatique point at 5:13,
which can be followed by a 3rd climax .. as i would also call the original climax.
which starts from 6:16 ^^

But .. maybe your right about that, blending 2 melodie's together in 1,,
while the second is moar harmony and get the 1st jumpst out of it :)

thanks man!

Agreed...

Awesome stuff. If you ever put together an album, i will totally buy it. I love supporting "freelancing" artists, if you will.

Was wondering why you put Mau5mate in the title? Maybe im retarded. But just an question. And I also love how you used the melody throughout the song. And it never got boring or even seemed repetitious. And i love the underlying melody throughout the second half of the song.

Good luck on whatever you do!

D-Chain responds:

I thank you ForestLomn!
yet i will make that album sooner or later, and i also hope to get remixen on it too[if it isnt any problem againt copyrights ect ect]

but i dont get your guestion tho ..
what do you mean,,
put mau5mate in the title? i mean that would be my artist name.

Really like it!

I really liked the beginning. The drum and bass feel to it, then the transition into the guitar. Really nice transitions. Nice job!

Blueragebar responds:

Thanks a bunch ^_^. This is my most recent song, so I've been able to practice making my transitions as smooth as possible.

I listened to a couple of your techno tracks, and I can tell that you have a lot of talent. Keep at it for sure :)

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