Sorry
The melody is good. But the volume up and down and up and down and up and down is really bad. And you really need to turn down the velocity on your leads. And also your transitions need to be smoother. Love the melody though. And the drums are pretty good too. But fix the other stuff please.
Not bad
Why are you using a piano 8 bit sound though for the melody? Not sure that was the best choice. And also, your "drums" are very distorted. I know that 8 bit usually is, but it is a little much. You also used some pretty annoying sounds.
Great 8 bit sound to it other than that though. I love how you brought it back into the melody at around 1:50. Great transition. The last half of the song is definitely my favorite.
There are also some random popping sounds throughout the song in different places. Dont think that they are supposed to be there. But great remix other than a few minor details:)
Lol Thanks for the advice. Thats weird, you liked the second half but the other guy didn't. Thanks for the 8! And I don't know what you mean by the popping sound.
Nice job
But why did you put it in the video game section? And also, I agree that you should make it longer. It is a pretty decent beat. Good drum choice and also love the effect you put on the drums.
At the very beginning... it sounds like 1 or 2 notes is a little bit off... not sure if that was intentional or not. But it doesnt sound to bad. Most wouldnt even notice it. But nice job.
what section would you suggest?
10x for review and will atampt to fi mistakes in longer version
Agree with everyone else
Seems that you are pretty good at writing stuff. But your mixing kinda sucks man... You need to either record with better software, mix with something better, or something man... You should talk to Burn7. He will totally help you out. He has some pretty epic stuff, and I bet he could help you out.
But i really like your guitar playing. And the other sounds go quite well with what you are trying to do actually. But again, need to work on the mixing part man...
Wow...
Dude, this is the 2nd song of yours i've listened to and I love your style man. Ok, anyone else who is listening to this, you must listen to this in at least 5.1 surround sound... It sounds like 10x cooler!
Hmmm... had to bump it down to 9/10 because of the slightly annoying synth you used around 4:00. I get what you were trying to do, but maybe a little less intense of a "whining" noise. However, i will say, you brought it right back to the song. So nice job there.
Love the ending. I've started to really like how you can blend 2 melodies into 1. I guess the second melody is more of a harmony. But yeah. Love it. Keep it up!
Thanks man :D im really glad people here on NG start to like my style ^^
its really an honor as for me a winning point towards succes :)
and yea.. around 4:00 i just needed build it up towards the climatique feel of the breakdown, and bring it back to the standard beat + chords,
then building it up once moar to a 2nd climatique point at 5:13,
which can be followed by a 3rd climax .. as i would also call the original climax.
which starts from 6:16 ^^
But .. maybe your right about that, blending 2 melodie's together in 1,,
while the second is moar harmony and get the 1st jumpst out of it :)
thanks man!
Agreed...
Awesome stuff. If you ever put together an album, i will totally buy it. I love supporting "freelancing" artists, if you will.
Was wondering why you put Mau5mate in the title? Maybe im retarded. But just an question. And I also love how you used the melody throughout the song. And it never got boring or even seemed repetitious. And i love the underlying melody throughout the second half of the song.
Good luck on whatever you do!
I thank you ForestLomn!
yet i will make that album sooner or later, and i also hope to get remixen on it too[if it isnt any problem againt copyrights ect ect]
but i dont get your guestion tho ..
what do you mean,,
put mau5mate in the title? i mean that would be my artist name.
Awesome...
Great sounds man. Probably already are... but you should totally talk to my friend Burn7 and play some shit with him. Your sound would go very well with his guitar skills as well.
Really like it!
I really liked the beginning. The drum and bass feel to it, then the transition into the guitar. Really nice transitions. Nice job!
Thanks a bunch ^_^. This is my most recent song, so I've been able to practice making my transitions as smooth as possible.
I listened to a couple of your techno tracks, and I can tell that you have a lot of talent. Keep at it for sure :)
Nice Piano
Are you actually recording the piano playing in this? Because it is really cool. I play the piano and have always wanted to record. You are quite inspiring my friend. Nice job.
The piano is a real piano, but in sample library form. It is a piano from EastWest's Pianos Gold library.
-Gravey-
Wonderful!
Wondering... who played the piano at the end? It was really nice. And a bit of a change from the DnB feel of the song. But still good connections. The drums could have been a little bit louder, but great all around.
I played the piano at the ending :).
About the drums - I totally agree with you. However, I personally think my drum mixing has improved radically, if you check my latest song called Green Skyscrapers.
Thanks for the review!
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