ForestLomn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Acid Paradox - Discipline]

I do have to agree...

Not a fan of the effect on your vocals man... sounds to much like the numa numa song. But the rest is good... ish. LOL well, i do agree with the first review. Add some variety to it. And i also think maybe turn down the background parts just a hair in some parts. Its almost conflicting with the vocals. But good kick for the drums. And good clap, likin that much.

[Gates From Trance inTo Dance]

LOL love the randomness

It is a really awesome beat. Good drums to go along with the whole thing, nice random sound effects, LOL seriously that is pretty hilarious. A car beep and some other random shit in there. Love it. The only thing that could possibly make it better, is maybe a counter melody in the first half of the song. Like to harmonize or something. But other than that, oh, and the transition into the second part is kinda abrupt. But still awesome. Nice job!

DjZedL responds:

I know that, transition to second part was really sharp... I don't have any idea to make it better... Plus for this time i can't do any changes, because more than 6000 person have heard this track!
Anyway thank you for this review! You write that you liked bells and beats + my SFX's - it's really good news for me :)

[Madness 6.5]

Wow...

What is that sound effect you use for most of the melody? It is very unique and sounds to awesome and crazy to be a preset of any sort. Love it. The only thing i could say to maybe improve, is add a counter melody to harmonize maybe, or add a little variety to the sound effect for the melody. Like not use it the whole entire song. But still really good.

cheshyre responds:

Good advice! I was just feeling like that melody and I couldn't get away from it. Thank you!
p.s. The sound you are talking about is a preset, I just screwed with it a bunch.

[*Rave Beat* (Loop) / ZeRo BaSs]

Lovin'

Loving the piano keys in the background. The only problem is... its to short. I guess it is loopable, so you could just end up looping it and it would sounds good. LOL also love the "brass" sound of some sort, almost sounds like a trumpet or something in the background. Nice job.

[B7 - Infernus]

I like the second part:)

The slower part is one of my favorite parts. Ha ha partly because you can hear me playing:) but and because its so melodical and stuff. LOL did you lengthen the ridiculous drum part that cannot be played by any drummer ever? because thats what it sounded like. Oh and nice job on programming the whole drums yourself. Lol and i love how you just faded it out. You probably just got lazy or whatever. But you cant really hear the part when you start stealing melodies from your other songs though. But nice job:) Love the finished version.

Burn7 responds:

Yeah, I did increase the ridiculopathy factor on the drums at the end. And I faded out specifically so you can't hear the melody stealing :P And yeah, the drums are hard as hell to get to sound cool, but I made sure to pay a ton of attention to them.

Thanks one more time for making this actually sound like a real song.

[Ominous Intrigue]

LOL!!!

Cant wait to see everyone else's reaction to it... because i was there when you finished it! Ha ha and maybe not fixing all of those little tiny things you wanted to fix is for the best. Gives the song a little character:) But really love the song. Glad you actually finished it... unlike many of your other WIP's... you should finish some of the others. But love it and cant wait to hear more.

Burn7 responds:

Thanks, glad it catered to your select tastes. And I'm trying to go back to all my WIP's and finish them up. Because some of them are pretty interesting and/or almost finished anyway.

[[DJ_ITD] - Forgotten Kingdom]

Love the buildup!

The buildup at the very very beginning was epic! Love the melody. Everything. Not much to say to improve.

djInTheDark responds:

Thanx a lot, glad you like it!